Chapter 02 - Page 05

posted December 30th, 2009, 8:48 pm


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December 30th, 2009, 8:48 pm

Captain Ghost

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... sorry for the wait guys. I don't know what to say.

I guess life just kinda.. hit me... -shrug-
Will try and get you more updates, in the meantime, while I feel like updating.


So, here we are. With... Colourrrrr.
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Is it just me, or does something about the page feel... off? I don't really know what it is though. =/
Anyway, these guys are new for the second version of GT... and, after rereading the rough drafted pages I have for this chapter... I love 'em XD

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December 31st, 2009, 8:47 am

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Yes, I know the feeling, sometimes life will hit ya. Glad you shrugged it off.

A new page in glorious color, nice. They are a fun pair. I like the center two panels with the characters and dialogue exchange.

I'm unsure about your feeling about being "off" on the page. If I had to pick anything to improve it'd be the trees in the background. I know I place a lot of focus on the foreground characters and the dialogue and dread backgrounds, spending little time with them. I sometimes try and cheat by doing something quick then using Photoshop's blur effect to try hide what little time I spent on them. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. Anyhows, look forward to more pages.

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January 12th, 2010, 3:33 pm

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Ack!

Yes, looking back at the trees...
They definitely need improvement haha.
I think by that point I was half trying to experiment [trying to give them a 'painterly' look or something, I'm not sure, but either way it failed] and half just 'I want this page done with it's been too long adfksdhfla'.

Which I really shouldn't let myself do >,<

But yeah, thanks :3

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