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| Captain Ghost, 27 May 2009 01:09 am | |
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Wheeee I'm -hoping- to have two more pages up this week~ I just have to 'shade' and add text/boxes/bubbles, and they're good to go. In any case, hey, I think I might be improving, even if only a little =) Shading's got a long ways to go, but hey. Practice makes perfect... Prologue should end on page 18 or 19. And then we can get to the, you know, pokemon world o.o; EDIT: ..His chair? ,... What chair? ... Now, you see, consistency is definitely one thing I need work on @_@;; |
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| Zerosignal, 27 May 2009 03:22 pm | |
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I thought the face/head consistency in this one was a lot better. Especially compared to the last one. Not trying to be mean but that last one she had a completely different head shape in nearly every panel... Just let me know if you're not interested in critique and i'll be quiet. =P Shading and art overall is definately improving, I like the layout of the panels on this page also. Makes things interesting to look at. Just one more quick thing, his forearms are incredibly short. An easy thing to remember is that forearms (in general) are roughly the same length from elbow to wrist as they are from shoulder to elbow. Like I said, tell me to go away if you want to =) |
| Captain Ghost, 27 May 2009 07:21 pm | |
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Oh, nonononono! PLEASE, critique is definitely appreciated, and I thank you very much for taking the time to do so. Looking back at the other page, I think I sort of get what you mean... so, I'll have to try and watch out for that in the future, as well the forearms. Thank you very much ^^ The panels were fun to do, actually xD yayy. |
| Zerosignal, 27 May 2009 09:17 pm | |
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The only reason I asked was that I know some people prefer to do their own thing, regardless of what it looks like. Purposefully disproportionate to suit a style if you know what I mean. His arms were fine in the last page... |
| Captain Ghost, 27 May 2009 11:22 pm | |
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Mmm, I see ^^; Well, in any case, thanks a bunch :) |
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