Chapter 06 - Page 12

posted August 27th, 2012, 12:37 am


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August 27th, 2012, 12:37 am

Captain Ghost

Rambling ahead :x

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Hmm...

A quick callback to the reason Willow is here-- and to a warning Willow was given earlier on, when she touched Gary's necklace. . .
http://ghoststory.smackjeeves.com/comics/859886/chapter-02-page-17/

It feels sometimes as though I am getting toooo far away from the main reason Willow is in this universe- that is, to find and retrieve Frey's medallion.

Now, if it wasn't obvious enough, it's hinted at that Gary's necklace may just be what she is looking for, and so, it could be inferred that that is why she's sticking around with him.

I fear this isn't made obvious enough in the story, however-- and besides that, it's not the whole truth of the matter anyway.

Willow's just lost and confused, mostly, haha.

(Here's supposing the plot does need to get rolling again though. Soon!)

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August 28th, 2012, 8:58 am

Living Rock

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I like how you composed the top of the page, how Willow is waking up and you left the panel open. The guy's face who gives the warning looks really nice. And the page has a variety of different angles. Great job with the page.

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September 3rd, 2012, 12:05 am

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@Living Rock: I'm glad it came out the way I was hoping it would-- I'm not always sure how well things are gonna transfer from thumbnail/concept to actual page haha.

Frey (guy at the top) is by far the character I love to draw the most, hee~ so I'm super glad he came out all right for this one instant he pops back up haha~

I definitely want to put myself through more practice with angles :3

All in all, thank you~

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