Chapter 06 - Page 09

posted July 15th, 2012, 6:10 pm


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July 15th, 2012, 6:10 pm

Captain Ghost

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Originally, that sentret was going to be blue. Or green, hahaha.
Then I decided orange would be better given the red bushes (which I failed to make look like bushes, arghhhh). So that it would have a better chance of not getting eaten, I guess? I dunno.

Some of the text on this page turned out small.. My bad D:

Oh!
And I don't usually plug, but if you like guitar/video game music at all,
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He does covers/medleys-- pokemon, legend of zelda, star fox, mario... A bunch of others, too.

See ya next week!

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July 16th, 2012, 3:53 pm

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Cute pokemon. I like how it is looking up in the 6th panel.

The bottom three panels have less color compared to the panels above them so it makes the page feel top-heavy/the bottom less finished. Not saying you need to fix it, but maybe something to consider on future pages.

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July 26th, 2012, 7:55 pm

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@Living Rock: Oh! I definitely see what you mean. I'll give fixing it a whack this weekend.

I think my line of thought was something like 'the top is kinda... busy...' and wanted to compensate with the bottom being lighter--
but I guess it wasn't quiet put together in proper fashion~

Thanks a lot for your feedback =) as always, tis appreciated

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