Chapter 05 - Page 02

posted February 12th, 2012, 3:18 pm


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February 12th, 2012, 3:01 pm

Captain Ghost

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Blah. "How does I colour?"
Just didn't have the patience this weekend I fear >< Keep catching random colds n shiz, and it's like, leaaaaaaaaave me alooooone, body D: But anyway, just about over this one I think. Yey!

I like scenes with no dialogue... just not sure how well this one was pulled off O:

But anyway. See ya next week~

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come to think of it. I maybe should have put at least that first narrator box on the last page, to make the sequence less confusing. . . hmm.... -ponders-

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February 13th, 2012, 8:36 am

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I'm glad I read you included author comments, the narration box on the top of the page made me think a day passed before the series of events on this page occurred. I guess the guys were too caught up in their sleep to stop the thief.

I hope you feel betta soon. I was ill recently, I'm betta but still have a little bit of a cough. No funs.

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February 13th, 2012, 11:23 pm

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Definitely agree with Living Rock. The comments do help clarify what's going on.

And yes, get well soon! Both of you!

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February 14th, 2012, 2:33 pm

Captain Ghost

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@Living Rock: dang D: so I was right in my guess that I shoulda done things a tad differently haha. . . Hope you feel 100% soon (:

@HKim: Dangit! I will probably try messing around with the boxes then, I quite messed up on the timing, as I'd feared @__@ And, almost almost better now I think :>

Thanks for the feedback guys. It's appreciated~

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